Tuesday, July 12, 2011
I need help on correction of my word usage and construction usage on this paragraph?
In a one sunny and wonderful beautiful day in a particular sector in the forest of the British Columbia there was an imploring and adopted beggar whom was incongruous from their asylum to spend a day in the city of Surrey given consent by his parents. Whilst in the city he was seen by its denizens to be foraging left over food from a filthy garbage, heretofore, the denizens commiserated him that the nature of his fate will be ameliorately collated. However, this impecunious beggar is veracious from his beart concerning its converse when conversing with the noble denizens of Surrey; he was ameliorately imploring better future days, especially of his adulation of his birthday given by Providence. the way he foraged the left over food from the filthy garbage was pedantically wholly. Moreover, he was influently incentive by the noble denizens with their luxurious dress and cars which insisted him with exigency to find an honorable occupation from the good hands of the potent and conducive proletarians of the BP Company in the present of his sense of sight walking in the city of Surrey.
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